2003, Form B. Novels and plays often depict characters caught between
colliding cultures – national, regional, ethnic, religious, institutional. Such
collisions can call a character’s sense of identity into question. Select a
novel or play in which you describe the character’s response and explain its relevance
to the work as a whole.
Often,
societal values and prejudices shape many of our ways of thinking. We learn to
yearn for one thing and hate another thing, just because that’s what people
around us do. Depending on the kind of society we live in or the people we grow
up with, we develop certain types of ideas and prejudices. The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison tells the story of a young black
girl, Pecola Breedlove, who learns to hate herself because of her ethnicity and
the supposed ugliness that’s attached to it. All around her, whether it’s in
her parents, teachers, books, toys, or peers, Pecola sees evidence of the idea
that whites are far prettier than and superior to blacks. Rather than embrace
her identity as a black girl, she experiences an unfortunate loss of identity by
yearning to be white and to associate herself with white culture.
One key
trait that Pecola associates with white culture is beauty. Throughout the book,
Pecola feels that she’s ugly and thinks that she would be pretty if she were
white. More than anything, she wishes to have blue eyes, a quality only white
girls can have. She sees that Maureen
Peal, who is a light-skinned girl, is admired as pretty and favored by teachers
and classmates alike. On top of this, she realizes that there are only white
toy girl dolls that her peers play with. Being exposed to white culture in this
way, Pecola directly associates white culture with beauty.
Pecola
also learns to associate white culture with stability and tight-knit family
lifestyle. When she reads stories about Dick
and Jane at school, she sees two white kids who are happy and have loving
parents. She also sees her light-skinned classmate, Junior, come home to an
attentive and caring mother. By seeing examples of white kids receiving care
and love from their families, Pecola finds another reason to want to be white.
Meanwhile, Pecola’s experiences with the
realities of being black often teach her to hate black culture. Much of Pecola’s
hatred comes from her own upbringing with her parents. The two parents are
always arguing and physically fighting one another whenever Pecola gets home
from school. Pecola had to live in a foster home as a small child because her
drunk father burned down their house. Often, her mother wouldn’t be home to
make food until late at night. To Pecola, the unhappy, volatile lifestyle at
her home directly represents black culture.
Understanding how Pecola was
exposed to black and white culture, it’s easy to see why Pecola struggled to
find self-worth as a black girl. The sharp contrast in quality of life and
quality of treatment made it clear to Pecola that becoming a white girl would
be the best thing ever to happen to her.
Good job! The only thing I would try to make it more clear that her wanting to be white is questioning her identity so it directly relates to the prompt. Your discussions about "white beauty", white culture, and black culture include good examples about confusion about identity and are clear to the reader. You keep relating back to the thesis which makes your argument strong and keeps the reader on track. The organization is clear and you sufficiently answered the prompt with good evidence.
ReplyDeleteI see that you are making an effort here to respond to earlier peer reviewers' comments, except for the issue of responding to the meaning of the work as a whole. This is ironic, as this prompt specifically asks about this question--it's not even a hidden question here. =) Don't forget that you really need to tie your ideas together by showing WHY--what is the author's purpose in making these choices in the first place?
ReplyDeleteYou responded really well to the first part of the prompt, but you still need to explore how it contributes to the work as a whole. Other than that, you have all of the evidence to set up this next point that needs to be made. Be sure to answer why on the next prompt, which should be easy since you were able to provide thorough evidence.
ReplyDeleteYep, I agree with the earlier peer reviewers ! I liked how you structured it, providing good, specific examples that were easy to follow, and I could see your argument.
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