2010, Form B.
“You can leave home all you want, but home will never leave you.” —Sonsyrea
Tate
Sonsyrea Tate’s statement suggests that “home” may be
conceived of as a dwelling, a place, or a state of mind. It may have positive
or negative associations, but in either case, it may have a considerable
influence on an individual. Choose a novel or play in which a central character
leaves home yet finds that home remains significant. Write a well-developed
essay in which you analyze the importance of “home” to this character and the reasons for its continuing
influence. Explain how the character’s idea of home illuminates the larger meaning of the work.
Do not merely summarize the plot.
In JD
Salinger’s Catcher in the Rye, sixteen-year-old
Holden Caufield discovers the pain of being homeless, both literally and
emotionally. After being expelled from Pencey Prep boarding school, Holden
decides to leave school three days earlier than he’s supposed to. The story
follows Holden as he wanders through New York City, meeting new people. Holden
is extremely jaded and doesn’t connect with people very well. He often passes
judgment on strangers he observes and talks to, calling them “phonies.” Despite
his disgust with his peers at school and parents at home, Holden finds out that
being “homeless” is a lot more miserable than being with familiar people. In an
emotional sense, Holden has two kinds of homes: one at school and one at his
home. Though he never directly acknowledges it, he realizes he misses home. Through
his rough experience living alone on the streets, Holden ultimately learns to
appreciate the familiarity of home.
For
Holden, leaving the boarding school means leaving one of his two emotional
“homes.” Even in the extreme case of Holden, who doesn’t get along with people
and is inclined to harshly judge his peers, the familiar faces of friends and
teachers at Pencey Prep create a comfortable home for him. During his three
days on the streets of New York City, Holden often thinks back to fond memories
from school. He thinks about Jane Gallagher, a girl he likes. He thinks about Stradlater,
his roommate at Pencey. He even calls and arranges a date with his former
girlfriend, Sally Hayes. These clearly stem from his a strong emotional attachment to the school. Pency Prep was a sort of home for Holden, where Holden found comfort and safety. Because of the loneliness he experiences on the streets of New York, Holden recognizes the emotional value of his home at Pency Prep.
Holden also has an emotional attachment to his real home away from Pency Prep. But his parents aren't the reason. It’s
clear that he harbors negative feelings towards his parents. He sneaks into the
house at night, careful not to wake his parents, and goes directly to his sister’s room. In an uncharacteristically kind gesture, he happily takes Phoebe
to the zoo and takes her to a carousel ride. Watching Phoebe on the carousel,
Holden cries out of happiness to be with his sister. Phoebe is one of the few people Holden seems to be relaxed and comfortable with. After three days of uncomfortable and cold interactions with strangers in NYC, Holden gets a breath of fresh air in his day with Phoebe. Coming home to his sister reminds Holden of the emotional value of his home at home.
Holden’s constant homesickness
reflects his internal struggle, a central aspect of the book. Although he thinks everyone is a phony and doesn’t outwardly admit his loneliness, there are clear signs that he feels the pain of having no home. At one point, he asks a taxi driver “Where do the ducks go when the pond at Central Park
freezes?” His question reveals his yearning for a safe, comfortable home. Being
kicked out of school and harboring resentment towards his parents, Holden is a duck that
doesn’t have anywhere to go.
I think this is a very well written essay. You gave all of the needed background information in the intro, instead of the body paragraphs. You back up your claims with clear examples and everything is very clear. The only criticism I guess I have is very how you start your paragraphs, but I don't think that it's a huge problem if you don't.
ReplyDeleteAndrew,
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty good essay. One thing I noticed though is that you seem to say the same thing over and over again. I catch myself doing this a lot to try to take up space and make my essay look more substantial than it actually is, but try to eliminate it for the AP essays. Also I noticed your whole essay could have probably been in the intro paragraph. Maybe try to spread out the information you have there more evenly throughout the essay. Overall though it was a very well thought through essay! Good Job!!
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