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Form B. Novels and plays often depict
characters caught between colliding cultures – national, regional, ethnic,
religious, institutional. Such collisions can call a character’s sense of
identity into question. Select a novel or play in which you describe the character’s
response and explain its relevance to the work as a whole.
Often, societal values and prejudices shape many of our ways of thinking. We
learn to yearn for one thing and hate another thing, just because that’s what
people around us do. Depending on the kind of society we live in or the people
we grow up with, we develop certain types of ideas and prejudices. The
Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison tells the story of a young black girl,
Pecola Breedlove, who learns to hate herself because of her ethnicity and the
supposed ugliness that’s attached to it. All around her, whether it’s in her
parents, teachers, books, toys, or peers, Pecola sees evidence of the idea that
whites are superior to blacks in looks and culture. Rather than embrace her
identity as a black girl, she experiences an unfortunate loss of identity by
yearning to be white and to associate herself with white culture.
One key trait that Pecola associates with white culture is beauty. Throughout
the book, Pecola feels that she’s ugly and thinks that she would be pretty if
she were white. More than anything, she wishes to have blue eyes, a quality
only white girls can have. She sees that Maureen Peal, who is a
light-skinned girl, is admired as pretty and favored by teachers and classmates
alike. On top of this, she . Being exposed to white culture in this way, Pecola
directly associates white culture with beauty.
Pecola also learns to associate white culture with stability and a tight-knit
family lifestyle. When she reads stories about Dick and Jane at
school, she sees two white kids who are happy and have loving parents. She also
sees her light-skinned classmate, Junior, come home to an attentive and caring
mother. By seeing examples of white kids receiving care and love from their
families, Pecola finds another reason to want to be white.
Meanwhile,
Pecola’s experiences with the realities of being black often teach her to hate
black culture. Much of Pecola’s hatred comes from her own upbringing with her
parents. The two parents are always arguing and physically fighting one another
whenever Pecola gets home from school. Pecola had to live in a foster home as a
small child because her drunk father burned down their house. Often, her mother
wouldn’t be home to make food until late at night. To Pecola, the unhappy,
volatile lifestyle at her home directly represents black culture.
Though
Pecola is the main character, she isn’t the only one in the novel to struggle
with her black identity. Pecola’s mother, Pauline, also romanticizes white
lifestyle by watching Clark Gable and Jean Harlow play a perfect white couple
in movies. Geraldine, another black woman, shows her shame in being black by
explaining to her half-black son that there’s a difference between black and
partially black kids. Pecola’s struggle is only part of a larger, recurrent
theme in Morrison’s book. By giving the novel a title that emphasizes Pecola’s
struggle, Morrison highlights how blacks face an unfortunate loss of identity
by conforming to society’s ideas that whites are superior to blacks.
Understanding
how Pecola was exposed to black and white culture, it’s easy to see why Pecola
struggled to find self-worth as a black girl. The sharp contrast in quality of
life and quality of treatment led Pecola to believe that becoming a white
girl would be the best thing ever to happen to her. By choosing to title the novel The Bluest Eye, Morrison not only highlights Pecola's struggle, but she also emphasizes the loss of identity that blacks experience by conforming to societal prejudices.
First off, this is a really good essay! But as I was reading, and even just looking at its length, I wondered if you maybe spent too much time on it. That probably sounds awful; how can you spend too much time on an essay? But when I do these, I try to act as though this is an actual open prompt on the AP exam so that when I am doing the real thing, I won't be as pressed for time. If this essay didn't take you very long to write, more power to you! There were just a couple things I noticed. First, the paragraph about her wanting a white, loving family didn't make sense to me until I read the paragraph after that about her bad home life. I think the essay would be more effective if you switched those paragraphs. Also, I think the prompt wanted you to focus on only one character, so the paragraph about her mom and the other people wasn't really necessary, which would have helped save time too. Overall though, this is an excellent essay!
ReplyDeleteThis is really great! You have very effective topic sentences and the organization is pretty impeccable.I also thought you did a nice job of not over-summarizing. Yes, it is long, but this is a second revision so that makes sense. This is very good! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Brianna when she says the part about the other people wasn't important, as the prompt asks about only one character. However, if you adjusted the paragraph to show how the other characters' views influenced Pecola, it would support your thesis quite nicely. Great essay! You did a good job of finishing it to fulfill the comments on the first attempt.
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